Swordticus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Animal Chasing]

The faceless reaction is what got to me. It's just so unatural but accurate XD
Really digged the cartoon.

[Kirby:Shroob Invasion Ep1]

That was pretty damn good. Thought it was going to be worst.
Animation wise, it was magnificent. Sounds were top notch too. Only things I had a problem with is the dialogue and mainly the backstory. It had WAAAAY too much unneeded information. It needs to be brief and more to the point. Heck, in actuality, there really shouldn't BE a backstory, Everything should be included in the characters dialogue.
So for example instead of saying that the shroom people were stopped by 2 brothers, mario and luigi in the backstory, it would be better if you only briefly mentioned them, as a reference. "Damn you, you're just as annoying as those 2 stupid plumbers!!"
So yeah, double check your spacing with the comma. That kinda bothered me.

Minkto responds:

Really thrilled you liked it so much :) and your criticism is very good.I shall definitely be more to the point with the characters dialogue and add some humor here and there.I think anyone seeing this episode will be clear enough as to what is happening.Also I will make sure the grammar is better in the next episode.
Again really appreciate it! :)

[brooooooooooo]

Not much to say to this.
Liked the art but was still too short.

[Adventure Time]

Well, not much to say. Totally random and I honestly couldn't tell what was happening. The "jokes" were badly executed and the timing likewise.

[.:Smile:.]

That was so messed up in so many ways...
It was incredible. Animation was smooth and nice, has a catchy song, maybe a bit too gory but it was magnificent. Especially loved the way you made their pupils get bigger or smaller.
Bloody brilliant.

[Danny goes BOOM]

Whoo, you gave it an ending :D
Still just a single joke, but at least it was better implemented.

[Pokemations (]

I believe this was brilliant.
Things that you need to work on is animation and face expressions.
Voice acting is okay. I also believe you gotta work on timing, cause this could have been way funnier than it was.

ThePropellerMunki responds:

Thanks for the advice. I should problably get voice actors for my animations next time and I am trying to make my characters more alive and believable.

[GameGrumps Danny go BOOM]

Well, it was WAY too short, it wasn't a truly funny scene and the animation just... ends.
It should at LEAST loop or else it just feels incomplete.

Jimbobasaur responds:

Thanks for the tip :)

[Hell of a Job]

This was spectacular. Maybe a bit too short but I love the little details you added into it.

Chelo-kun responds:

Thanks! I'll make the next one run longer.

[Nintendo 2DS - The Actual]

Hilarious. although it really isn't an animation that should loop.