Swordticus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[megaman and the platforms]

I think that was great, although the concept for the joke about the platforms I felt was... not unnecessary but I think it was executed poorly. I think it should have been more to the point. Still, the airman gag made me chuckle.

[A lifestory]

That was great.
Animation was nice and smooth, the song was nice and fit perfectly with the overall mood and I'm SURE this has a way deeper meaning than what I can interpret.
Anyway, awesome job.

[Kill This Guy]

That was gory and entertaining :D
Although I think that in this case I would have perfered for it to have been like one of those "Choose how you'll kill him" games. With just a few buttons that let you choose the animation, I really think that would have heighten the quality. Still, really good job ^_^

[Penguins!!]

Well, it was honestly kinda boring.

VSAworld responds:

You don't have time to get bored! ;)

[#2 in Public Restrooms]

That was great. So simple but very well executed ^_^

[Game Grumps-Arin is Weird]

I like it.
Somethings that I would change would be their voices in the first part. I get what you were trying to do, but it sounded too weird, like their voices were slowed down and a bit deeper. I believe it should have sounded maybe muffled, or just more far away, but not quieter.
Animation needs a lot of work, maybe use more camera angles on different perspectives. I would also recommend making more face expressions, to give the animation more "life".
Use references when drawing, it'll help you get the proportions right.
And well, have to say it, when he started singing the little mermaid I burst out laughing XD
Man, I love Game Grumps.

[Zebra's Favorite Movie]

Well it's...
It's zebra humor.
Good joke though.

[Age]

You know what. I like it.
Kinda bothered me how you could see lines from one thing through another, like for example there was a lamp, and you could see the lines from the wall go through it.
Another one is when he was walking, I could see the little lines for the grass through his teeth.

Another issue would be the beginning, those 10 seconds of pure silence as the camera got closer to the building was really unnecessary, and I truly thought I had to do something, like press a button, and that shouldn't be something I should be led to believe.
So yeah, I liked it. Maybe if it was longer and had a stronger message?

frass70 responds:

yeah i went full on lazy with this one because i had to make it two minutes in eight days so i made the establishing shot extra long to kill time and didnt really fix the lines here and there lol